Like a river to the ocean, I’m drawn to you
Your call; a silent whisper within the wind
Caressing me into a gentle seduction
Making me weak where I stand…
Upon unfamiliar ground; virgin to this experience
However, still familiar to the pull of attraction
I let down my guard; submitting to
The leap of faith beneath me…
Cushioned for the break of my fall into heaven
Knowing you’re there to receive me
Open arms; open heart; committed to love
Me with every fiber of your being…
Honest and true; giving your all not half
Treating me like the Empress I am
Borne of your missing rib
Created to fill the void in your life…
With joy and laughter, tenderness and passion
Blu Jewel 2009
Love to live; live to love
7 comments:
Another lovely poem!!
You got some deep vibes going on here. You need to be up at somebody's open mic night...and wear those shorts..haha.
Yay!!!!
I love the images that this piece creates.
Good lawd gal, I need a drank and a blunt after that one. Nice!
It's a shame I don't smoke..I feel like lighting up a cigarette after reading that poem... Very erotic..
(Or do I just have a dirty mind?
-:) )
@Yaz - glad that you stopped by; even happier that you liked what you read.
@Queen - I've got an open mic coming up, so maybe this'll get read there.
@Chele - Use the images girlie ;-)
@Lady - LMAO, you are crazy woman!
@Keith - Nah, you're just a man who appreciates the erotic word.
Love to live; live to love!
A truly heartfelt piece. Me likey :-). Happy Thanksgiving!
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