11 September 2009

Fluid Motion

I thought I'd lost my mojo since Nikki's passing, but it seems I'm even more inspired. Maybe it was the recent full moon that gave way to an increased energy that could only have come from her. Like Nikki, I love the moon and always feel exhilarated by the lunar cycle and especially the full moon.

Here's something that I came up with this morning...

His attention; purposed and intentional; either by familiarity or memory; he made his way into her; third eye blind and was met with little resistance. The slight tension; released into a sigh as if the torture of the wait was over. Heat rose like steam through city grates; its intensity furious and yet delicately passionate as their bodies gelled into one form moving in a rhythmic pace.

Words; lost in an inaudible melody sounded like gibberish only they could understand; only they needed to understand. It was their way. It was how they communicated; silently through telling eyes; speaking a lover’s tale.

Their dance; a waltz leading to a quickened tango only to be suppressed into staggered pace reminiscent of a child’s game of musical chairs punctuated by anticipation. And like the calm before the storm, the motion smooth; erotic; and exhilarating gives way to a tempest; bodies colliding in a frantic motion. Arms, legs grasping; releasing and breaths like zephyrs cloud the room.

Minutes pass like labored hours as the seeming perpetuity of the union plays out. An escaped moan; the saturated kiss; the bitten flesh; the Neanderthal grunts and thrusts all colliding without contest. The climactic clarity of the journey now complete.

© Blu Jewel 2009

11 comments:

MOMSWEB said...

If you aren't already, you should be getting paid for your prose.

Blu Jewel said...

@mom - you are bery kind...no, I am not currently being paid for my prose...any suggestions how I could?

love to live; live to love!

Keith said...

I felt the same way...and then this week came and I've been flowing on both blogs..

QueenBee said...

Hey you know me, whether you are getting paid or not, girl continue doing what you're doing.

LadyLee said...

Well either you or Keith need to throw a load of mojo my way because I'm trying to kickstart the best way I can. I'm trying my best... hopefully next week.

Very nice prose. Very well done indeed. You should definitely submit it...

Lyrically speaking said...

glad to know you didn't lose your mojo...you got inspired and that's always a good thing. I was also bothered by the news about Nikki but life must go on and she would want you to keep on writing

Believer said...

I need to email you! :)

Her Side said...

Lovely! I agree that you should be paid for your work. I couldn't take my eyes off of this... and somebody in the office had started talking to me!

Nothing at Narrative.com for poetry entry??

B2B said...

"...an escaped moan, a saturated kiss..."
well writ BluJewel!

and i also need to email you quick quick!

Your prose is deep, and as you can see has touched a couple of us....

so, about that number!

Hehehehe
Have a fab week!
hola sometime too!

Mizrepresent said...

Loved it sis. Made me dance in my head and in my heart.

YAZMAR.COM said...

Nope, you haven't lost a thing!! Never stop doing what you do best...