27 August 2009

a lil something that came to me

When you pour your love inside my cup
I feel my well spring rise and swell
As it’s satiated from its desert state
And you’re no longer just an oasis
But the embodiment of natures wonder personified.

© Blujewel 2009

love to live; live to love!


JenellyBean said...

Oooh that was good!

I feel like that everyday when my fiance comes home from work.

Its usually really late, so I feel like I've been fasting from him.

When I see him and get that hug and kiss it makes my whole body light up.

QueenBee said...

Alright now. Go on with your bad self.

Blu Jewel said...

@ Jenelly - That's awesome and always treasure that feeling and share it with him often.

@Queen - LOL! I don't know where it came from, but I'm happy with how it came out.

Love to live; live to love!

Keith said...

I'm happy with how it came out too!

It gives me visions of a flowing brook. Love it!

Keith said...
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Blu Jewel said...

@Keith - Glad you did...haven't written a poem in a while but I'm hoping more will flow again.

Love to live; live to love!

Mizrepresent said...

Exactly gurl...sis, exactly how i envisioned my love to be.

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Lyrically speaking said...

very sweet and to the point