11 September 2008

Why love?

This piece found its way into my mind this morning...

Why am I so full of you
But you’re elusive to me
I use you in all I do for others
Yet the reciprocation vacates
Why do I believe in something
I can not see, but feel so deeply
Are you likened to the faith
I hold so near and dear
That keeps me going in spite of
Love, why do you treat me so
Filling me with hope and promise
Then leaving me with sadness and emptiness
I love not for loves sake
But for the fulfillment of a natural need
To give that which I feel for he
Who’ll become the counterpart of me
Why love are you mirage of my hearts desire?

© BluJewel 2008


~Deb said...

Absolutely beautiful.

John 20:29 ---this should be added right underneath that scripture!


Loved this!

Believer 1964 said...

While love is many a splendid thing it can also make our heads spin while trying to figure it all out. Love is complicated and I’ve learned not to question it, but only to accept and experience the hills and valleys with vigor.

Blu Jewel said...

@Deb - thank you and for the scriptural referenece; and i'm glad you enjoyed the poem

@believer - completely and utterly agree with your comment.


Shai said...

I am shutdown right now. Love ain't live here in a while.

Great piece.

Copasetic Soul said...

go ahead poet!! glad you put wrote this one out.

Blu Jewel said...

@shai - love is everywhere and yet so elusive; i'm sure it will head you're way in due time.

@copa - thanks bruh, that means a lot coming from you.


Mizrepresent said...

Gurl, i love this...oh to question love is to question the universe...where all answers unfold...in time.

LadyLee said...

Very nice... very nice indeed.

Eb the Celeb said...

Why does love not know that we dont love for love's sake... ugh

Rasta said...

Thank you for that poem, Ima feel like it was written just for me! Love it!!

I haven't been here in a while, so you can imagine my reaction to your header ... BEAUTIFUL!!

~ Rasta

Ruthibelle said...

that was BeeYooTeeFull!!

And true...

Blu Jewel said...

@miz - and i'm patiently waiting; patiently waiting *sigh*

@ladylee - thanks and glad you like it.

@eb - cosign your "ugh".

@rasta - so happy you stopped by, miss you man. thanks for the compliment and i'm happy that you liked the poem. don't be a stranger.

@ruthibelle - tank you mi sistren fi check in from yard.


karrie b. said...

ur a dope poet blu...get yourself published or something.

"Love, why do you treat me so
Filling me with hope and promise
Then leaving me with sadness and emptiness"

story of my effin life.


rebecca said...

The Star

Twinkle, twinkle, little star!

How I wonder what you are,

Up above the world so high,

Like a diamond in the sky.


When the blazing sun is gone,

When he nothing shines upon,

Then you show your little light,

Twinkle, twinkle all the night.

The dark blue sky you keep

And often thro' my curtains peep,

For you never shut your eye

Till the sun is in the sky.


'Tis your bright and tiny spark

Lights the traveler in the dark;

Though I know not what you are

Twinkle, twinkle, little star!

-----by aoc power leveling