05 January 2010

First poem of 2010

I'm still working on it; or at least I think I am, but this is what I've got so far...

The complex composite of your being
Subsides into anticipation of my proximity
You yield open and willingly powerless to defeat
Lost in the sublime reverie of our moment
Freefalling into the blissful abyss
Where open arms welcome you with a first embrace
The softness of a familiar but yet still unknown
Sensation of this; our first kiss
Setting us free; now capable of submission
Having grown weary of the confine
Gentle brushstrokes applied in vivid colour
Manifestations of loves spectrum exposed

It's all possible!


LadyLee said...

That was very lush, woman! You do paint a vivid picture with your words.

Very nice....

Blu Jewel said...

@Lady - why thank you suga!

It's all possible!

chele said...


Shai said...

Nice piece. It has a softness to it.

Blu Jewel said...

@ Chele - He's taking me there!
@Shai - Thanks. I'm inspired.

It's all possible!

Keith said...

This is like the good jazz I'm listening to..It flows.

E.M.H. said...

I like the poem . . . :-) The imagery is powerful but not overpowering or exaggerated. SNAPS!!!!